Category: Writers Block
Class Poem 2008
Nature
The dandelions flow through the wind with the hot yellow sun beaming down.
The deep blue skies arch over the mountains.
The lakes are so calm and blue.
The green leaves explode in the trees.
I'm in the sky flying with fishes.
The sun disappears behind the deep grey clouds.
The rain is cool as the soft spring breeze.
The lake ripples with the movement of the wind.
The skies are as wide as a vast ocean.
I'm in the sun buzzing like a yellow jacket.
The roses are so red they light up the yard.
The field of roses, tulips, and dandelions make a beautiful blanket.
The fish in the blue lake swim toward the hot pink rubber worm.
The red bobber bobs in the lake.
I'm in the ocean swimming with the pigeons.
The fields of green make the world seem alive.
The green grasshoppers hop in the fields.
The sun scorches in the day; fireflies blaze in the night.
The fire in the night has a warm spring glow.
I'm in the fire and there is no coming back.
The fire dances ferociously.
The fireflies twinkle through the skies.
The nice blue sky is where the fluffy clouds lie.
The bright blue skies are a sign to a better day.
I'm in the river flowing with gentle calmness through the wilderness.
The sun hides behind the mountain.
The moon appears in the darkness.
The bright red fire flows like water in an ocean wave.
The rain falls softly like leaves from a tree.
I'm in the world living with nature.
wow... that's beautiful.
really good descriptions
lame this sucks
I don't like this poem because there is nothing but imagery, no emotion or feeling, just one long description. It's overbearing. The poetry you write yourself is much better.
that was the point. it describes nature...